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PostPosted: Wed Aug 18, 2004 11:56 am
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New Year's Eve, 2125.

A gripping display of fiery crimson streaks past your narrow window. Straped into your seat you can do nothing but stare at it from the corner of your eye. Intense vibrations supplement the tremendous g-force pressing you against moulded polyfoam. Then a jolt, a sudden, deep mechanical sigh, and the blue halo yields to the blackness of space. You relax, thinking the worst is over.

The Outpost, founded in 2101, is the first privately owned orbital space station manned by civilian scientists and contracted security agents. After dropping out of college you decided to enlist as a security agent for the research company ______ Inc, and after a six month training period and a brief assignment at their earthbound installation, you were given the oppertunity to request a transfer to the Outpost.

You never realised how large it was, like a city in space, with alien looking panels sticking out from every angle, absorbing sunlight. You watch as you approach, until shadow envelops your shuttle and you can see no more. A thud, and the whine of gyroscopic intruments winding down... you have arrived.

You depart with the rest of the people on the shuttle, recieve your gear, and are assigned a quarters. Just as you are about to crash with exaustion on your new bed, the lights flicker and die. A siren blares electronic confusion. The radio on you side crackles to life, yelling, gunfire, then screaming. "They're coming down on us! I CAN'T SEE THEM!" Then the falsely cool voice of a security commander, "Regroup. Find cover. Reinforcements are on their way." There is a loud metalic clank and the door to the hall collapses inward. Silence, mix with brief spatterings of radio communication you can only precieve as growling monsters overpowering well-armed agents.

Your heart races. You pick up your pistol, just recently issued, check the clip, and prepare for the unknown.

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 20, 2004 10:46 pm
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...That is excellent!! Shocked

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PostPosted: Sat Aug 21, 2004 10:28 am
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thanks now if I can only get off my butt and make it into a game :P

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PostPosted: Sat Aug 21, 2004 8:35 pm
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I like it, but, it kinda sounds just like the DOOM storyline. Still, it's cool. Cool
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 21, 2004 11:10 pm
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sounds like doom... too true.

But still, I quite liked the start of it.

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 22, 2004 10:47 am
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Yeah, I know it sounds like doom. :)

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 23, 2004 2:14 am
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Commodore wrote:
thanks now if I can only get off my butt and make it into a game

Believe me, you'll be on your butt a lot while making gfx, recording sounds, making muzik, creating texts, posting to ppl, eating, other assorted thingy-mo-bobs...
Remeber to try and get sum exercise. I go for a run or do some sport every now and then, between gaming and stuff.

Joel Corrigan Smile

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