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PostPosted: Mon Sep 06, 2004 4:55 am
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I posted this at the other topic, but no one seems to care about that one so I decided to post the story here:
The story is like an alternate sequel to Wolfenstein 3D, Instead of Spear Ressurection.

This is the beggining of the other "prequel" mod I was making that screwed up:
November 1945:
It has passed 7 months since the death of Hitler, And you along with the rest of the allied forces are celeberating your victory against the third reich. But in the middle of the party, the band stops playing.
The colonel walks up on the stage and starts speaking in the microphone:
"I'm afraid I have some very bad news folks, todays evening news-paper just arrived."
The colonel takes a deep breath and continues:
"The news-paper says: "Reports say that the Spear of Destiny has been stolen from the museum by a huge, helmet-wearing, yellow man with two big chain-guns. Reports also say that the 50 high-class guards that were protecting the Spear, are all dead."
The colonel continues:
"At the same time the spear was stolen, we received this letter from a German scientist whiched claimed that this big, yellow man, is none other than Luther Von Drake's latest invention, The Todesmaschine 900, or for us known as Himmelpferd."
One of the officers say:
"But I thought that whole Himmelpferd story was just nonsense, but that means the rest of the story might be true as well, right colonel?"
"I'm afraid so, if we don't hurry up, Luther's plans of reviving Hitler with cloning, advanced robotic-technology and the power of the spear might succeed. But we can only send one man to Germany..."
B.J walks up in front of the stage and says:
"I'll do it colonel, whatever it takes, I'm gonna get the spear back."
And the following morning, you head for Germany in a plane, hoping that you will survive.

And this is the story for TGOEL:
February 1946:
Your mission suceeded, as your last bullet hit the big, bulky armor of Ultra-Hitler, he died in a big flash followed by a loud "BOOM!!". After celeberating your victory against Ultra-Hitler with the rest of the allied forces, you walk home and sit down in the sofa and think: "Whew, I'm glad it's finally over."
You turn on the radio. They're playing your favorite song.
But the song is interrupted by a news-broadcast.
"We interrupt your regular programme for an important message:
The so called Grail of Eternal Life has been stolen from it's vault in the museum of religious artifacts,
the guards protecting the vault has mystically disappeared.
Eye-witnesses say that they saw an italian guy followed by a group of human-looking robots after the robbery took place."
The following morning, you get a call from the president who asks you to come to him as soon as possible.
As you enter the president's house, he says:
"Welcome! I'm glad to see you here again B.J."
"Thank you, Mr. President."
"Please, call me Harry."
"Okay, What was the urgent business, sir?"
"We now know who stole the Grail from the vault. It was Cabeza and Colonel Müller."
"Holy shit..."
"That's not all, they plan to rebuild Himmelpferd! With new, more advanced technology!"
You take a deep breath and say:
"Where are they located? I'm going to get them!"
"But, B.J, It's far too dangerous for one man to go there."
"Trust me, Harry, Where are they?"
"They're located in Castle Todesdrache."
"Okay. I'll go get my stuff."
"Right, I'll contact the hangars to send a plane"
"All right! I promise you, I won't let you down, sir!"
As you are halfway towards the door the president says:
"And, B.J! Good luck!"
"Thanks, sir. I will need it!"
And on the evening that day, you head for Germany once again with only your knife, pistol and your courage.

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 23, 2004 3:36 pm
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The story is like an alternate sequel to Wolfenstein 3D, Instead of Spear Ressurection.

SR is an unofficial sequal to SoD. SoD is the sequal to Wolf3d.
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 23, 2004 5:48 pm
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I think we've determined the time line is probably something like this

1, 2, SOD, 3, 4, 5, 6, SR

altough concieveably SR could happen anytime after hitler's death.

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PostPosted: Fri Sep 24, 2004 4:26 am
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The story is nice. Such a pity about the extremely cheesy "Good luck (whoever)" and the "Thanks (whoever)... looks like I'll need it..." lines.

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PostPosted: Fri Sep 24, 2004 6:08 pm
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4, 5, 6 is before 1.

Nice story. I love SoD sequals. Why? Cause (no offense Areyep) SR is getting too much rightness. I think my TC should be a sequal to SoD while SR is nothing. GoEL seems nice enough to be one of those types.

Minor note, drop the info on the Spear at the beginning. Makes no sense. Just drop it and get a replacement.
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 03, 2004 11:55 am
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Here's an updated version of the story.
February, 1946, 20:05:
After celeberating your victory against Ultra-Hitler with the rest of the allied forces, you walk home and sit down in your blue sofa and think: "Whew, I'm glad it's finally over."
You turn on the radio. They're playing your favorite song.
But the song is interrupted by a news-broadcast.
"We interrupt your regular programme for an important message:
The so called Grail of Eternal Life has been stolen from it's vault in the museum of religious artifacts,
the guards protecting the vault has mystically disappeared.
Eye-witnesses say that they saw a "guy with an Italian accent" followed by a group of human-looking robots after the robbery took place."
You turn of the radio and think "I hope this is all a dream or else the nazis are in deep [Censored] trouble."
The following morning, you get a call from the president who asks you to come to him as soon as possible.
As you enter the president's house, he says:
"Welcome! I'm glad to see you here again B.J."
"Thank you, Mr. President."
"Please, call me Harry."
"Okay, What was the urgent business, sir?"
"We now know who stole the Grail from the vault, you heard about that, right?"
"Yes, of course, they interupted my favorite song."
"It was Cabeza and Colonel Müller."
"The Nazi Colonel himself?"
"Yes."
"Oh, shit..."
"That's not all, they plan to rebuild the Himmelpferd robot! With new, more advanced technology and 4 shoulder mounted rocket launchers!"
You take a deep breath and say:
"Allright, Where are they located? I'm going to get the grail back!"
"But, B.J, It's far too dangerous for one man to go there, even for you, the best agent we've ever had."
"Trust me, Harry, Where are they?"
"Allright, don't say I didn't warn you. They're located in Castle Todesdrasche."
"Okay. I'll go get my knife and my brown coat."
"Right, I'll contact the hangars to send a plane."
"All right! I promise you, I won't let you down, sir!"
"Of course you won't." The president says as he smiles.
As you are halfway towards the door the president says:
"And, B.J! Good luck!"
"Thanks, sir. I will need it!"
And on the evening that day, you head for Germany once again with only your knife, your brown coat and your courage...

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PostPosted: Tue Dec 14, 2004 12:09 pm
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Sorru for double-posting, but here is another small update to the story:

December, 1946, 20:04:
After celeberating your victory against Ultra-Hitler with the rest of the allied forces, you walk home and sit down in your blue sofa and think:
“Finally, the spear is safe again."
You turn on the radio. They're playing your favorite song.
But the song is interrupted by a news-broadcast.
“What the hell. What now?”
"We interrupt your regular programme for an important message:
The so called Grail of Eternal Life has been stolen from it's vault in the museum of religious artifacts,
the guards protecting the vault has mystically disappeared.
Eye-witnesses say that they saw a "guy with an Italian accent" followed by a group of doll-looking humans after the robbery took place."
You turn of the radio, sit quite for a while and then you think:
"I hope this is all a dream or else the nazis are in deep [Censored] trouble."
The following morning, you get a call from the president who asks you to come to him as soon as possible.
As you enter the president's house, he says:
"Welcome! I'm glad to see you here again B.J."
"Harry, my friend, how are you?"
You walk up to the president and shake his hand. He’s sitting behind his big, wooden desk.
"I’m fine, thanks. Sit down, B.J."
"What was the urgent business you mentioned in the phone, sir?"
“Did you hear the news broadcast on the radio yesterday, B.J?”
“Of course, they interrupted my favourite song. What about it?”
"We know who stole the Grail from the vault."
“Let me guess, the nazis?”
"Yes, It was Cabeza and Colonel Müller."
"Cabeza De La Mirda and Müller?"
"Yes."
"This doesn’t sound to good..."
"That's not all, they have rebuilt the Himmelpferd robot! With new, more advanced technology! Pictures of it shows that he now has 4 shoulder mounted rocket launchers!"
“What exactly are their plans? What are they going to use the grail for?”
“We suspect that they will use it to gain eternal life and invincibility. If that happens, the allies are doomed to be defeated.”
You draw a deep breath and say:
"Allright, Where are they located? I'm going to get the grail back!"
"B.J, you’re our one man army, our best soldier ever. This mission is far to dangerous for you, and we don’t want to lose you."
"Trust me, Harry. I got the spear back from them and I can get the grail back too. Where are they?"
The president sighs then he says:
"They're located in Castle Todesdrache, in the northern part of germany."
"Okay. I'll go get my knife and gun."
"Right, I'll contact the hangars to send a plane. And, you might need something warmer to wear."
"Okay. I promise you, sir, I won't let you down, sir!"
"Of course you won't." The president says as he smiles.
As you are halfway towards the door the president says:
"Wait, B.J! Here’s an ammo-clip with four bullets for your Luger."
"Thanks, sir."
And on the evening that day, you head for Germany once again with only your knife, your coat, your gun and your courage...

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